Mia

Candid portrait right after a chocolate strawberry.

too little contrast

Great shot , but could be lit better.

It tells a storey, but it is too dark. There needs to be more light to give her expression more life.

At first I almost passed this one up but it has a power to draw you in. You can't tell if there is blloud ,ice cream or what is on the girls face. But the lighting on the face sets the mood , DARK. I like it.

"The pissed off chocolate eater" I like it.