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Very pretty, very nice color. But the lighting and angle of her head do emphasize the size of her nose. Perhaps that was intended. Hair light could separate dark hair from background. 

Great hair and okay makeup.  I am uploading a retouch suggestion I believe is an improvement.  If you crop above her elbows it will look like she was resting them on a posing table.  As is, her elbows are hanging in space.  Her hand posing is almost feminine (try extended fingertips of one hand into the palm of the other) but this looks like she is thinking about throwing a punch!  I hope this is helpful.  Good luck.

Thank you so much J.W. Wall and John Webster for your kind comments and suggestion .  I really appriciated that !!!