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Any comments welcomed. Thank you for viewing

I like this picture. I like the colours and the way the streaks of cloud contradict the lines of the building. However I feel it is slightly unbalanaced and might work better if you included more on the left. The building seems too massy there and needs a bit of space to breathe. Just my opinion.

Thank you for your comments. I agree with the buidling to the left comment. There was a bushy tree that i cropped out in that section.

I disagree with Richard about the space to breath. We all know what sky looks like so don't bore us. The building is intriguing but also potentially messy so I would be inclined to tighten the shot, make the most of the order that the perspective and pied patching give without adding more than necessary of the competing sky to achieve the poetic balance. Keep to the drama otherwise you will loose my attention on this one. The square cropping also detracts IMHO.

I am coming to this image rather late, but wanted to express my fondness for it. I do like the perspective lines in this image, but wanted to play with the perspective, contrast and saturation. For your consideration...