Torso 7

Any comments or suggestions are welcome. Thanks. Dana...

Beautiful composition and tonal range. Well done.

 

-O

Fine Work,,to make more calm: maybe make Black R as Square !?

I like the asymmetric crop. Beautiful tonality.

Very original, I like the pose and the positioning!

 

Best regards, Dana!

 

PDE

Thanks to everyone for looking and commenting. 

 

Owen.  Glad you liked the composition.  I like to play with negative space and felt liked this worked fairly well. 

 

Niels.  Thanks.  I am not quite sure about your suggestion.  Are you thinking that the frame should be square?  I tried this but prefer the longer horizontal effect. 

 

Christoph.  Thanks for the look and I too prefer this crop.  The shot composition was straight from the camera. 

 

Pierre.  Thanks.  I liked the pose as well but have to credit the model for that. 

 

Thanks again to everyone.  Dana...

I also very much like the composition and the lighting. The large, dark negative space is terrific. Beautifully seen and made, Dana!

I like this very much I do and think it quite well made! If anything I might flip it so the figure is on the right. I often do this if there is no text in an image. The right side of an image is the stronger side and we read a photograph much like we read a book, from left to right.

-r-

Sure,,we are not all like Michelangelo,,,but what about the Asien audience !

I love images where the subject enters the frame at one corner and exits from another. It is something I like to do myself. As such, you can understand why I like this. A fine black and white image for sure.

Apparently most like it the way it is, but if you make the Black area right to the back as a Square, you will remove part of the asymmetry,,a question of taste and school,,,the Work is great and to be seen large,,,congrts. best niels

Mark.  Thanks for the look and comment.  I also like the negative space and was really pleased with the composition.  This is exactly how it was photographed, no post-cropping.  Glad you liked it. 

 

Raymond.  Glad you liked it and thanks for the comment and suggestion.  As I said to Mark, this was exactly how it was composed in the camera.  I will try and flip it and will let you know.

 

David.  Thanks.  I hadn't really thought of it this way but now that you point it out I see it.  I will keep it in mind in the future.  Thanks for looking.

 

Niels.  Thanks for clarifying your comment for me.  As I mentioned above, this is how it was shot, although I am not against post-processing or cropping.  I visualized it as asymetrical and prefer it this way.  Thank you very much for taking the time to really look and comment.  I appreciate it.

 

Thanks again everyone.  Dana...