dana at a farm

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Lee, while this photograph has a good *feel*, there are a couple of things that bother me. There is no separation or detail in the girl's body. It could be the scan, but it looks like a black blob. The pose and the black clothes present a photographer with a really difficult and challanging situation. It probably could have used a little more exposure. (Some people rate XP2 at 200. I don't know if you had that option with the camera you are using). It seems doubtful that you could see the detail on the negative, but if you can, it might help to print with less contrast or, perhaps dodge the body during printing.

 

It may be just me, but is the horizon slightly tilted? It seems lower on the left.

 

 

 

 

the horizon line was off but i fixed it.

This picture for some reason has appeal to me. I like it. It has the feeling of autumn

I like it too. I like the contrast. Did you shoot with a filter? It seems more contrasty than I would expect. But then, what the hell do I know? I'm an amateur who shoots 90% digital. LOL :) Cool shot.