flying pelican 3

Here is the bird cropped.

http://thumbs.photo.net/photo/17626833-sm.jpg

A snappy capture here, but for me the presentation is not correct (debatable). I feel that the more common approach to a landscape presentation at the same time giving the Pelican some space to move into would seem a little more "acceptable".

I noticed a green/blue tinge across the image that I tried to correct in my quick re-work (which I hope you don't mind).

I guess its just the way I'm used to "seeing" images of this nature.

Hope my image presents okay.

Regards

Thanks Grayham.  Your re-work looks great - these are helpful.  Thanks for the suggestions.

Regards,

-KA