Marija

Best regards, Ziko!

PDE

Lovely, model and pose but you are literally being too hard on her (with the light). You can see every pore of her skin on her cheek and nose accentuated.  The light is creating a shine on her cheekbone and nose. There is a hard shadow on her jaw, behind her hair. This is a film noir look but I don't think you intended to make it a slightly scary portrait.

You got the focus on her eyes with a nice, shallow depth of field, falling away. I'd like to see more portraits of her in a softer light. You have other portraits that are lovely and show the models to their advantage.

There is an unnatural hard light texture to her cheeks and nose that detracts from the otherwise interesting, honest facial portrait.  I rather like the turban.   I am assuming you played with post processing, perhaps a click too much.  It is an arresting face and the light is not bad at all.  Not dramatic but pleasant.  L  wish you well, gs.....