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sergiu_cirlig

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Exposure Date: 2013:10:06 17:30:52;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D800;
ExposureTime: 1/100 s;
FNumber: f/4;
ISOSpeedRatings: 100;
ExposureProgram: Manual;
ExposureBiasValue: 0/6;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 75 mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 75 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS6 (Windows);

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gregoryl

Hi

The pose and sharpness are fine. Good eye contact and the expression is interesting. The make up is attention getting. I don't know if you were shooting through some foliage or if it was added in pp. I really find the part obscuring her face to be a distraction, I'd like to see her face unobstructed. As it is I find myself looking at her hand since it's lightest in tone, clear, sharp and the way the image is working to me at least seems to be the focal point. I also find the yellow/green OOF bits rather overpowering for the image and feel it would work better if it was lighter and in tone and substance. Just my 2 cents.

Regards

Greg

 

 

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