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Piano


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Exposure Date: 2013:07:27 13:52:38;
Make: SONY;
Model: SLT-A77V;
Exposure Time: 1/125.0 seconds s;
FNumber: f/2.8;
ISOSpeedRatings: ISO 1250;
ExposureProgram: Other;
ExposureBiasValue: 0
MeteringMode: Other;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 24.0 mm mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 36 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5.1 Windows;


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Frank, I like this...mostly.  I really like the concept and the elements.  The flowers, woodtones in the piano, and the brick background really set this up nicely.  I also like the natural light from the window (?) just off to the right.  Compositionally, I'd like to see a version with a few changes.  I don't think I like the lamp.  It looks like it just got left there.  I'd remove it.  Then I'd re-compose to move the flowers from the center.  I've attached some suggested changes.  I also sort of like that the earth tones in the flowers match the piano and bricks, but also think it might be nice to see a version with more colorful flowers that might jump off the background a bit more. Hopefully not too picky, I really do like the image.  Thanks for sharing.

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