ciofalo 0 Posted August 17, 2003 The composition is too casual and the colors are too unsaturated and with a bluish dominant. I suggest to straighten the vertical lines by a slight anti-clockwise rotation, to crop the extreme left margin, to increase contrast and saturation and to remove the blue cast. Link to comment
jacques_weber 0 Posted August 17, 2003 nice colors, nice composition. I like the part of teh window in the background whih extend the foreground window. Stones are great! My only comment would be about the window reflections: I would suggest no reflections or an highligted reflection (one or the other) - I'm not a fan of filter use, but I think using a polarizer filter would have removed the window reflection. - Or at the opposite: I can guess there are some nice reflections in the window, but it's too small to be seen: You can crop nearer the window to highlight some interresting reflections Link to comment
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