four shadows

please offer critique on this and suggest better idea for post

production.thanks.

william, I prefer this one- great shot!

thank you for input. It helps to have another's opinion, as I am just learning and it seems subjective.

The motive is not in focus and the white burns out. But I like your image because of the movement and the proportions.

Tommy

Thanks Tommy. I find it a bit intimidating to post here because I am not technically proficient as many here, either in my shooting or post. I do learn through the process and that's what counts for me. In this case I burnt the shadows in, maybe too much.