construction overlooking the golden gate bridge

i recently got a 6x6 kiev-60 and i love it. im really starting to

like the square format! i should post other pics to my portfolio. i'm

also new to being critiqued.. ive never shown my work outside of

friends and family.

It seems like you're going for a parallelism but your borders aren't resolved sufficiently and I don't find the subject matter overly compelling that it would stay with me.