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More of Jessi from the Series....comments

appreciated....Thanks ....Tom

Quite Lovely Indeed! Nice Work...

-r-

Hello T. Carlos,

  Having looked, at length, through your portfolio, I want to say that you produce top notch work.  I would like to bring to your attention, however, a problem with this particular image.  I understand the room may have precluded your standing further away, the lens you had available was not what you wanted, etc.  What you have created here, however, is an image with a great deal of distortion called "fore-shortening."  If you compare the apparent size of her nearest foot to the apparent size of her face I think you will see it.

The way to avoid this kind of distortion is to stand further away and use a longer lens to crop the picture to the limits you want it. When I have faced this kind of a difficulty I have sometimes moved to another room or space for the picture.

My warmest regards,

Jerry

Jerry

Thank you for bringing the distortion to my attention. I was completely blind to it. Even the distortion comes through in the bench.

Thank you so much for the time you took and your explaination of cause and remedy. Truely a learning experience for me.

All the best

Tom