# 415

Although I am not entirely new to photography, I am always eager to

learn, so any comment will be appreciated very much.

You have a nice photo of two obviously tired tourists contemplating about who knows what and already full of impressions.

In my opinion, you have a small problem with a composition since you put the woman almost to the center of the image and a man (especially his camera) make the picture to fall heavily on the right side. So, you have to reframe the picture by giving the more room for the guy on the right side, or,

in my opinion better, to crop this empty space behind a woman's back - that way the distance in their thoughts will be more pointed out.

All the best!!!

Hi Lars. I disagree with Nebojsa. I think it is framed perfectly. The only thing that I don't like about the photo is the camera, but I have never been fond of images of photographers with cameras around their necks.

Thank you very much for your comments Nebojsa and Mongillo.

My purpose with the picture was to make a, partly humorous, depiction of the special kind of tiredness that can occur after a long day in the type of marriages – of which I know nothing of course -, where the one part is photographer and (rightly) requires some time every time there is a motive. The image was therefore meant to inspire a certain kind of unease.