lex_jenkins 13 Posted March 23, 2013 Very good photo - I particularly like the odd gesture of the rightmost person's hand atop the head of the next person. However the background seems overworked, as if some additional blur was done in editing. There's a pseudo-3D effect that I find a bit distracting, emphasized by a hard oversharpening halo around the five persons in front. But it's a minor nit and some viewers would find it acceptable. Link to comment
wimputs 1 Posted March 23, 2013 Thanks Lex, much appreciate.I like the colors and the face expressions off the women. The background is very busy and distracting. That's why I did used a bokehtemplate for the background. And I sharpen the women a bit. But I knew the difference between the front and back is too big. I tried different template's. But you right it's not the difference but it's the transition (halo) that is the problem. I Will work on that. Link to comment
limajunior 8 Posted March 23, 2013 Hi Win Good shot! Opportunity, colors, contrast, textures, sharpness and brigthness. Best regards. Roldao. Link to comment
momagnum 5 Posted March 23, 2013 Great shot. Very good contact with the models. Maybe to much air over the faces.Tommy Link to comment
wimputs 1 Posted March 24, 2013 Thank you Roldão and thank you Tommy and thank you Svetlana. Link to comment
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