portrait

Pull back a little; it'd be better to see the whole picture on the stone instead of just this quarter. Your focus is precise and I understand you were trying to show the man, but this should go either in or out -- just the man with no child, or the whole picture.

this is exactly how I liked it: half of a child's face and a piece of the border, but the whole family portrait is not less interesting. I'll show that as soon as I manage to figure out how to add picture here together with the comment. :)

I like the idea. Works for me. Your crop leaves in the frame just enough to think about the rest.