david w good 0 Posted February 8, 2013 This is an overall wonderfully crafted image. It has everything you want in a composition:- Beautiful model with a figure meant for this genre of artistry.- Perfectly lit subject and surroundings. The contrast between the black drape and the white background is perfect and not overstated.- Great texture in the backdrop! Not just a smooth white surface.- A pose to rival the painting of Venus.- A balanced mix of the model's covered and nude portions. It leaves things to the imagination.Altogether - a nearly perfect image. (this is certainly going into my "favorites" gallery) I say "nearly" only for one nit pic and really, this isn't worth considering, however, I'm going to anyway.I would have loved to see the portion of the black fabric encircle the model completely. There is a gap behind her that is large and obvious and because of the contrast between black and white, the eye is drawn to it. I'm not advocating a perfect circle of fabric surrounding her, it can be uneven, just have it go ALL around her. That would be my only change should I try to recreate this beautiful scene. Well done and thank you for sharing your work with us. Link to comment
amitai schwartz 0 Posted February 10, 2013 Thanks very much for taking the time for this thoughtful comment. It is appreciated. Link to comment
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