In the autumn grass

You made her look dirty.  Those weeds do not belong in her face and on her nipple. Just 12 inches over and the photo may have  been saved.

Thank you for the critique Jack,

Every once in a while I manage to do the pretty girl behind the grass type of image.  I do it because I like it.  I do suggest that you state your likes and dislikes rather than generalities that may not get universal support.

I was going to give you the honor of one of my critiques, but I discovered you have only two pictures posted.  May I suggest you build your portfolio as first priority.

Jerry