Kerri

A very dramatic image of a very dramatic model!!!

Jim Phelps

Well, she does take a dramatic stance.  Her head is not as well illuminated as the rest of the image and her eyes are hard to make out.  Her hair vanishes into the background.  Her lipstick seems over applied, which tends to give her a negative empathy (perhaps intended)

I see you are photographing with a square format camera, yet some of the other images in this folder are cropped into rectangles.  I think that might have worked here also.

Jerry

A most lovely and well made portrait! Great light control and I think you've done a marvelous job with the negative space indeed.

-r-

A beautiful result, Jim!