Copycatting eye in the sky

Composition is good.

in my opinion, focus point on nipple and a bit more contrast

Very cool... love it!

I like this as presented. This is a classic framing but rarely does the model look at the viewer. The single eye is properly the focus point and deserves to be the center of attention. As lovely as the nudity is it is really secondary to the connection we get through her eye.

I think in part the reason this photo works so well is because the shape created by where the model's arms and thighs meet somewhat replicates the shape of the breasts. Intentional? Anyway works well :)