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Photo taken in April 2001 with my 2 megapixel casio digital camera

Hallo Paul, interesting picture. I think you can make it better,if you crop just under the stone table. Perhaps use a fill-in flash next time.

 

Regards,

Paul, it is difficult to judge composition when you have to scroll to view the entire photograph. Post a little smaller image. However, judging from the small photo, it seems to me that the arch is much too centered. Also, another problem is that the right side of the wall is burned out and lacks detail in places. About all you can do is wait for less contrasty light. Sorry to disagree with the above poster, but I would certainly forget about fill flash (unless you could move in a giant softbox :-) ). In this particular case it is likely that the mixed light sources would be obvious.

 

The photograph does have some pleasing elements and is certainly not a bad photograph--it just has some minor flaws. (No need to reply unless you want to comment on something I've said.)

Would this photograph have worked better if it was taken from a lower angle? Right now the tree interferes with the arch. I do agree that the bottom needs to be cropped off--it doesn't add anything.