patrick_heller 0 Posted July 16, 2003 But nude5 and especially nude4 are much better, in my opinion. There's to much empty space for my taste, and normally i like emptiness.The arm on the left side of nude5 is distracting a little, but I still like it very much.Perhaps you should crop nude7 and make it an upright. Link to comment
mattb1 0 Posted July 16, 2003 I like this one a lot, but I can see the criticism of too much empty space. If her breast was about 1/3 of the frame instead of ¼ it may work a little better. In my opinion the rule of thirds helps out a lot in framing. Otherwise, a very striking photo. Link to comment
kellyg 0 Posted July 16, 2003 Thanks for your feedback! I do like the ying/yang affect of cropping it like this... What do you guys think? Link to comment
intransit 0 Posted July 17, 2003 I might suggest the ever so slight turn of the model or a slight move of the photographer to the left, to avoid the outside of the models arm on top and her side on the bottom, to have the full slope of the breat without any other lines... Link to comment
owen_omeara 1 Posted July 25, 2003 I think it is excellent. I have to agree that a bit less negative space on the right might work better. I like the line of the breast and the bit of arm does not bother me but it would also work well to eliminate it. Good job. -Owen Link to comment
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