Misty Night 4

Is this appealling to anyone? Tips on improving? Please be brutally

honest.

adam,..i like this one best of the three.i've never seen a print of 3200 film,is the contrast and grain the same as here or did the scan change it somewhat?

It is about the same, but the prints from the darkroom do the images more justice. The light looks more realistic. You don't see the outlines of the "levels" of light. Thanks for your comment.

The question raised about grain and contrast is legitimate-- the image does not have enough bits, especially in the lighter parts of the sky. The other thing for me is the lack of focus in the foreground tiles; this is more of a problem because of the grout lines. I recommend throwing the foreground out of focus and losing definition in it, perhaps using a digital image program. Overall, I really like the photo's play with light and dark. The image looks great when it is small and these things are not so obvious.