Rileigh and Kaelynn

New to portraiture, any comments or advice would be greatly

appreciated, thanks!

You came back from England ...;-)) I came back from Greece.....

Nice to see you back and trying a new way for you. The " cut" of composition is nice. The FG vs BG is also well composed , the real problem is the use of light ,the faces are very shadowed and therefor the FG child details are not well seen. a tiny bit farthere from the tree would have lighted both better.

I think that a bit more practice  will help you to get better result as the 'models 'are beautiful !

I learned a lot from my first "real" portrait shoot and also realized hat a challenge it is to be able to work and think quickly (especially with young children!). After the dust settled and I was able to view these on my laptop, I realized a lot of the learning opportunities that were there. I agree, the lighting was one of the biggest issues. I think tying them to the tree would have been helpful as well LOL!! Thankfully, they had a blast and they've been anxious to do it again for me.

Thanks for stopping by!