nudes Untitled

I am looking for feedback to see how I can better my skills. What are

your thoughts on this photo?

Thanks Brian

the frontal nudity doesn'twork. Let her tilt the body away from the cam, so the breast(s) are viewed in profile. Try to add a seam of light at the outline of her body. Face should get a larger part of the frame, and more interesting lighting. BTW, the size of the foto is to small to judge about technical things like detail, sharpness and so on.

HTH

Aren't all redheads little spitfires Brian?  Nice shot!

Brian, 

 You might want to think about the background and its message in the image.  It is clearly something architectural and such items are usually vertical to the ground.  Here it tips drastically, which implies an earthquake or other happening.    I am not joking about that; the background sets the feeling.

 You might also consider the lighting.  It is coming across from the side, causing sharp contrast, yet the face is in shadow.  With nudes consider that lighting shows texture and surface detail if used creatively.  

 Your model has a facial expression that suggests she is not enjoying the experience.  She is looking directly at the camera, and therefore the viewer, yet she is not in the mood to be a pinup or glamour girl.  In fact, she looks a bit pained as though the entire experience is not good for her.

 You have placed a very large logo prominently across the bottom of the image.  I would suggest a small logo or initials in the lower corner where it does not cover the image.

 Lastly, how old is your model?  She frankly looks about 14 years old.  You certainly will want to have a copy of her ID to prove she is of legal age.  Assuming that to be true, you could get a much more cheerful look on her face by telling her that models over 18 who look younger can get great modeling jobs doing teen fashions.

Regards,

Jerry Matchett