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I was going to say that this is the daddies but no arms makes me feel uneasy. I can live with one of her legs being lost to the darkness but the way the arms are lost... that for me is too much. If you had just managed to capture just some of the arms that would have made it for me.

 

If it hadn't been for that, this would have been worth a 7 in my view.

I disagree with the above comment regarding limbs lost in shadows. In fact I think that is exactly what makes this photo interesting. I don't like the positioning on the frame though, and it seems to me the title is incompatible to subject matter.

Lighting and composition is perfect

I like this image. Your composition and ligthing effect is great. Very aesthetic, great work.

I think that the arms would help this out. Also making the girl alittle bigger and cropping alot of the unused black from around the subject. T.Page

Daniel: Me gusta mucho la idea aunque tal vez si es mucho espacio el que dejas alrededor de tu modelo. Tal vez misma idea pero con más modelo y menos espacio?

Really nice picture I really like the idea of all the darkness!

Danniel this is very difficult to critique properly because (like 3 other pictures in the folder), you have a lot of empty black space. Now on a computer screen that means the subject is very small, so we can say "yes this composition is good" or "the subject needs to be larger". When you have light and shadow in a small number of pixels on screen you lose some of the medium areas. It might be worth adding a comment with a section of picture in it. I think this is a good picture - but viewed like this it is hard to be sure