Jocelynn 5

Pretty model, but you're background is a little distracting (particularly the white line).  Also you might try having your model hold a reflector to bounce a little light back onto her face.

Liz stated my comment as well:  the face is too dark and the background (in particular) is too bright.  That little white triangle in the upper left is also distracting.  Main thing right now is that it needs work on the lighting.

Tracy, I do not know what your thoughts are about this image.  There are numerous ways to process and adjust it.  I am submitting one of many possibilities for your consideration.  Good luck.