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Equilizing of the lighting would have been maybe better, maybe not!

Best regards Jacob!

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Jacob, this is good, however try getting burning down everything to th eleft of her arm in this image, you will find if you darken that all down to a point where it ceases being a distraction, the focus on the dramatic light on her face will finaly dominate and give the image focus.

intrigante,bel progetto,complimenti.

saluti paul

Thanks pierre for ur comment. Since it was inside a museum and i didnt have anything than limited light from a window and didnt want to use flash since i still have to learn how to use the flash in situations like this. Any suggestions how to make it better?

Richard, how should i do that?  With software in post process or with different technique? Im sorry if sound a bit strange question but i have very little experience other than family shots, birthdays and standard vacation shots. Highly apreciate ur comment.

Grazie Paolo per il tuo commento gentile. saluti Jacob

Jacob, This is somehwta what i was considering, Not sure how you will find it but for me it places a greater influence on the girls face and headwear. (not so easy working on a small Jpeg) I did it in Lightroom, silver effects pro and PS Elements, Just basic dodging burning and contrast changes(same as i would do in a darkroom.)

Richard,Your version looks amazing.....  Much better in my opinion.... I wanna get into post processing more. I use canon the canon softwaree now but plan to buy lightroom. Or any other suggestion what would be a good choice for a beginner like me? I see you use multiple programs.. Man, i realy appreciate you took the time to make this edited version and comment... Thanks.....