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At the outset, may I say that my version of your image may not do it any favours........ but these are my thoughts.............

This is a good environmental image however I do not find the vignetting too pleasing on the eye. For me the image is quite dark and possibly lacking in definition. There is also quite a bit of un-needed space that could be cropped (personal taste).

In my rendition, by cropping the image, I have removed the vignetting and lightened the image. Hopefully my touch of sharpening has added value to the definition.

Your thought process has merit which is why I have tried to give you food for thought in terms of presentation...........

Photography is subjective..........

Regards  

Hi Grayham!

Thanks for your constructive and helpful critique! I do agree with you regarding the cropping of the picture.

Now as you do mention it, my picture is a little bit too dark.

Vignetting is of course a personal taste, but thanks for your thoughts :)