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Two brothers at a school football game.

this is a great shot, except the boy on the left has no light on his face. it's very industrial wiht the background and it might have been nice to see more of their bodies...nice job

Sophie is right, a bit of more light and able to see the more of the kids would have made it perfecto ! But still i really like this shot. I love using Tri-X Pan 400, the grainy look bring the images to life !

Fill flash and perhaps less DOF would improve this nice pic.