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Very magazine, well done.

This may work as a fashion image, but I am not familiar with the nuances of fashion.  What I see is a contradiction: two people very close together, and yet, so far apart.  He looks disinterested, she has not relaxed her body against his.  There is a visual connection, but no emotional connection.  Decent tones and contrast---her smooth skin next to his rough skin.

Interesting pose with good light and the exposure is spot on . I'm not sure about the background , to me there are too many distractions . Bill

Hi John, thanks for the comments. I did want to get that disinterested look from him while she is trying to get his attention. I don't see it as a fashion shot really, just soemthing different.

I agree a bit with the background William, especially the dominant bar across the top left, but it a city image.

Appreciate the feed back guys.