An anthem for our country

this was my first open bulb exposure. what do you think?

I think three things detract from this. The first is that it just doesn't look sharp. The second is that you've cut off the circumference too sharply and the third is the flag which competes too strongly with the rest of the elements. It's a good idea, though and I like the way you've placed the struts to lead the eye into the picture.

Interesting shot and effect, but not sure how you did it.