Untitled

Just trying to get an interesting pattern there. I like how this

turned out. Any feedback as far as pose and lighting would be

appreciated.

 

Thanks

Tom

you don't say what lens you used, but my guess would be a wide angle, which causes a distortion in size between the near and the far. this is just my humble opinion but I think the size of her legs compared to the rest of her is unattractive, as is not totally covering her public area with the hands regardless of whether she is wearing clothes there or not on this type of pose. Kevin

Personally, I don't care for the pose at all. The lighting and such is appealing to me, but the pose really detracts.

Highlights don't look right. Composition would benefit if it were symmetrical.

It if looks good then just go with it. The picture would be a little improved if it were a shade more symmetrical, but its still a top piece of work. I love the light and the pose; it's unconventional without being so far out that it's unfamiliar.

I never cared for this pose, but I like the high key exposure :/.