For my photography final I had to present a body of work. I chose to turn a poem I had written into pictures.

Also, this was a staged scene, to illustrate my poem.

This was one of a large series of photos illustrating a poem I wrote.

I'm afraid this one just doesn't work for me. To begin with, the whole thing is grey without any true black or white anywhere. The background is too dominant and distracting - you need to crop in much more tightly around the people. I'd have to say I really don't like it as it stands at all.

It looks normal as far as blacks & whites go when printed normally. It looks funny because I'm not good at the computer end of photo manipulation.