Abstract 16

From a set of abstracts I did about 20 years ago. Shot with extension

tubes and micro nikkor f2.8. I metered off a grey card and then made

adjustments for tubes and bracketed wildly. Daylight from large

window. I always liked the slides projected (Kodachrome 25) but could

never really get anyone to print them well. I think they look pretty

good on a monitor, however.

I think I can see where you're going with this but I have to say I don't think you got there. The object on the left needs to be a little further right to really grab the eye and the white at top right is just too distracting. There needs to be some darker tone there to keep the eye in the image.