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Bell in the Cemetary


ma2hew

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Hoping to get some feedback. What do you guys think. This is an old

bell which I found in the corner of an old cemetary.

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The concept is great, the bell makes for an interesting subject, and it's environment is an important aspect of portraying it's purpose for existence. I sense that the building in the background is linked to the bell in some way, and yet it doesn't look like a cemetary, there are no obvious headstones, etc.

 

The tones are great, those C41 films can give very fine results.

 

I question the severity of the composition. The fact that you've cut through the bell itself, and to a lesser extent it's support frame, has me wondering why, and wishing for more space. I notice in others in your portfolio you have a tendency to cut through parts of your subjects, and it is generally pleasing. Certainly stick to the tight style you have developed, but perhaps occasionally let the subject speak for itself with a looser framing. This may have been one to try it on.

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