my first with Kala

Beautiful work.

Interesting feeling because of the tight cropping and Kala's comfortable expression. She's an excellent model... I'd prefer a darked background. Anyway, this is more than a photograph.

Very good

I'm not keen on the hotspots on the model's hand and forehead, and the large patch of light (which looks like a fogging accident) strongly competes for our attention. If it didn't look so artificial, it might have added something to the story.

I find the cropping and lighting on the face a little pretentious. It may work better with a more simple approach. Beautiful model.

The background patterns (contours of light & dark) have similiar feel to the figure study. Very effective.

I like the natural pose of Kala here and, of course, as ever your lighting! - thank you so much for commenting my pic "Eyes"

i dont like the background but the girl is good!

and I like the background. and the model.

Background, Light, Composing... all verry good! Perfect!