Sunset on the Sound - 2.0

This is a different crop of the previous image. I got feedback sayingthat a composition without the yellow band in the previous image wouldwork better.

Your comments / suggestions are as always greatly appreciated.

Thank you.

I like this version better. Now my eyes rest where you want, on the tiny boat and across the beautifully exposed colors of the mountains and sky. Good work!

Irene

Thanks Irene.

 

Beautiful image!!

The peaks need more room to breathe.  If I were in your shoes, I'd be working on toning down the brightness of that yellow layer at the top of the other photo.  It's receiving a lot more sun than anything else in the photo, and I think that's the source of any "problem" in that other photo.  You've shed one problem and created another (although if I had to choose between the other "as-is" and this one, I'd take this one; still, don't give up on the other just yet -- I think it can be rescued and be the best version of all).