Afternoon in the spring time

I want to build a portfolio and would appreciate any comments to this

photo. Thanks

Nice light, interesting branches, but the out-of-focus branches and the airplane contrail detract from this image. If you intended the airplane and contrail to be part of the image, I'd suggest making them much more prominent. Looks like an accident as is.

A smaller apature would help to draw in the viewer with a greater depth. Now the lighting is very well done. I have a sense of the branches reaching up to grab the plane and pulling it to the viewer.