Test with underexposure technique

I think the exposure works very well, but the shine from the makeup under the right eye stands out a little to much for me, also I find the shadow being up against the models face odd

 

I am not saying I dont like it, I do, i think its great or I would not have said anything these are just the only 2 things I noticed in a otherwise great photograph

 

Ray

the shine's not really a problem, although i think he's referring more to the lack of makeup on her left cheek. you've done a great done w/ this low key technique. only, you definitely want to get ride of the shadow on your background. it's fighting for attention.