airstream

thoughts, comments, etc. welcome

Technically fine but I'm afraid this doesn't do anything for me. There's nothing that catches my attention. The door to the right prevents it from being a pattern shot. Perhaps if you printed that right in the image would wake up a bit.

Thanks Harvey, this one is hard to connect with without seeing the rest of the portfolio which is incomplete. I live in Venice, CA -- it's a very transitory neighborhood, so this one may be a "you had to be there..." image. A little is lost in the scan/size -- you can't see the details of the newspaper covering the window, the license plate or the star over the attenae. Interesting comment regarding the door on the right -- not much density in the neg to play with but I might give it a try.

I never get that street photography look. If you stare at it long enough it just turns in to a bunch of geometric shapes. Eh...