Are you looking at ME?

I'm trying to do a little more portraiture and would appreciate all

feedback.

From the waist down, it's a sexy pin-up shot - tight jeans, nice rounded rear, wide stance - but from the waist up it's more of an unposed, candid look. If you're going for a pin-up, carry the pose through to the top, adding the big sway to the back, etc. If you're going for the candid look, she needs to stand in some pose that can be found in nature.

If you're just trying to send the viewer spinning, it's a clever twist because the mind has to work pretty hard to resolve the top and bottom half of the photo.