portraits Muse

Beautiful!! Nice b&w!!

simply an excellent composition

None that I can see.  I wonder how it would look if the furthest inside window surface were the same brightness as that of the closest inside window surface (i.e., darker); that might put even more attention on the model.

janis,  really like your image.  am not sure you want to focus more attention on model but if that is a objective i think a good start would be to eliminate the first window as that by the way it is situated,  just naturally pulls the eye from model, or if not that severe your at least aware of it at all times.  lovely work!

I think Roger makes a good point, and that's also why I thought the last window ought to be darkened.  Those light areas naturally attract the eye, and the model ends up competing with both windows (IMO) for attention (only in the theoretical visual or photographic sense; trust me, if I had been standing there, my eyes would know where they wanted to look!).