Leila

Thank you!

With open loop lighting I would like to see the nose shadow extend lower instead of directly sideways.  Raise the light source to your right or lower your subject.  I would also suggest you bring your subjects chin towards the camera for a full facial view or away for a 2/3 because this is neither.  I like that you have it short lit.  I can't tell if you are using a window or a softbox for your main light.  Your fill looks like an on camera light.  I don't care for the pin prick of light in the center of her pupil.  That could easily be taken out in photoshop.  The pole sticking out of the top of her head is distracting.  Your composition is very centered and static.  Try using the rule of thirds for one of your subjects eyes on your next project and see if that doesn't help.

Don't be offended that I didn't ooh and ahhh over how wonderful you are as a photographer. Mom's and friends can tell you how great your work is.  Best regards, and keep shooting.

Dennis

Thank you Dennis, I have used my Canon Speedlite and it is turned to the right. I am not very used with portrait photo.

Hi Lars,

I like this B&W portrait - especially the balanced tones. I personally learned a lot from Dennis's critique and I agree with his comments. My main suggestion was to avoid the corner above the lady's head. An evenly colored background would have been better too. Something to bear in mind for the next shot!

Best wishes,

Mike

I like the light on her face, it shapes her face in a nice way. I think the light in her eyes is positive, there is one rule that if you cant get a catch light in the eye don't have them in the picture. perhaps you can enlarge the light point of the strobe a tad bit. a small movement of your camera angle to the side would give you a solid background I think the light one would be the best because it gives you the highest over all contrast. If you have the possibility set up a portrait session with her and try some different light and environments and you will end up with a great serie.

Gott nytt år!

Best regards Tore