Baby blues

L.A. make-up artist in front of the camera

Light seems quite flat through out the photograph. And the composition with the large area of flat background doesn't make it very interesting. Hope this helps.

Well, yeah, but her make up is perfect! :-)

 

I guess what I see here are sparkly eyes and a beaming smile. The composition is unconventional, but the question is whether or not the photo can be improved with something else. I think the pose and composition work, but some variation in the tone or color of the background might help. As for the lighting, it looks to me like garden variety glamour lighting. It's nothing earth-shattering but it isn't supposed to be and it's well done.

 

Remember always that a big smile hides a lot of flaws.