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If you don't mind me saying, I think the frame is too harsh.  I also think she is too off to the left side and even though her gaze brings one back towards the center, the image has too little space on the left and too much on the right.  She is a pretty woman and people will like that but I think the photograph could be better technically.  Hope that helps.  Have a nice day.  Katie

There are so many great things you have done here, specially lighting which is so well balanced, your choice for the black and white format here is very wise also and the sort of contrast and tone obtained are of very high quality, the model eyes been brought out in a remarkable position so they well connect with the viewers.

I have no problem with the frame work as this this pure personnel choice but yes the model head being too much to the left do disturb the balanced here, if you have done any cropping there, it is advisable to reconsider it and give the model more space there to float into.

Thank you for sharing it and wishing you all of the best.

Rashed S

gracias por tu comentario, de verdad de gran aprecio.

eh tratado de hacer cosas nuevas , hay veces que mis fotografías , ya no les encuentro el gran impacto como yo quisiera, pero por eso eh tratado de hacer encuadres nuevos , pero esta bien tu punto de vista y mas como lo escribes en tu comentario 

gracias , y te invito a ver mas de mi portafolio

saludos desde mexico.

Sinceramente ... a mí no me disgusta el encuadre. Sigue en línea la postura de su cuello. Como destacable, has captado una hermosa mirada y el gran manejo de las luces que tienes en todas tus fotografías. (6) Abrazo

Nice portrait!