wenger 0 Posted May 30, 2003 Kezia... nice subject with cool colors and the clean ladder sets it off nicely. Something seems awkward about the composition to me though. I think a crop from the sides would help as attached. Link to comment
abintraphoto 0 Posted June 4, 2003 I agree with all Thomas says except I would only crop the right side a bit ..... It grabs your attention - very important. Link to comment
blago 0 Posted June 4, 2003 I think it is for a vertical shot, Kezia. The idea is simple but very strong. Almost colourless ladder against the heavily painted wall dividing the space in different "windows". Different in form but with a proper geometry and pleasingly framed by the ladder parts. The vertical symmetry of the ladder could help a lot, imo, as I am trying (awkwardly) to show. Regards. Blago Link to comment
kezia 0 Posted June 11, 2003 I don't know what to say about your version, Blagoy. I love the idea of framing so much of the image inside the rungs of the ladder, but turning the boat on its side somehow confuses my senses. Maybe that's just because I know what it is. Obviously, I could have some fun with this one. Link to comment
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