grand/great grand

portrait of my grand and great grand daughters

taken at 70mm f2.8

any advise ,apprecitated

very good....the boy,at the back,is a little blurred...I like the expressions here..congrats.regards.

I think it is too tight. If there were even black space around the entire image it would help.also the straps on the girls dress should be fixed. I have a hard time seeing this type of stuff as I'm shooting, but I'm trying. I get too wrapped up on the technical side, I forget the composition side :)