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camilo estudio

Artist: Miguel Alonso Camilo;
Exposure Date: 2011:08:12 13:04:49;
Copyright: Camilo Estudio;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D200;
Exposure Time: 1/125.0 seconds s;
FNumber: f/7.1;
ISOSpeedRatings: ISO 100;
ExposureProgram: Other;
ExposureBiasValue: 0
MeteringMode: Other;
Flash: Flash did not fire;
FocalLength: 85.0 mm mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 127 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS3 Macintosh;


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Miguel,

 This is a nice relaxed look of a pretty lady.  There are several things I would suggest that could be done differently.  Pose wise - she is looking strongly to the right, which suggests that she could be moved in the rectangle to the left, just stopping short of cutting off her foot.  Her hair and dark garments have gone close to pure black losing texture and substance; the response curve of the image can be changed.  I do it in Adobe Camera Raw by manipulating the curve shown there. It makes the blacks separate enough to show texture again.

 The right side of the image is simple and quite good, but the left side is cluttered with all kinds of things that distract.  I submit one new crop for you to inspect that severely changes the photo but puts more attention on the lady's face and is, perhaps, more suggestive of her personality.

 

Jerry

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