Vanessa

Hi Joachim,

Oh...to be the wind !

Nice lighting , nice composition, and nice model.

Best Regards,  Mike

Best regards Joachim!

PDE

Joachim:  Pretty model and wonderful tones,.  I love the way her back is lighted.  She has a wonderful back but I suppose that a prejudice of mine.  Just a couple of observations.  The veil seems like you attached it to something to hold it in place for the shoot.  It would add more drama if it was blowing in the wind like her hair.  The vertical shadow going up her leg separating the front and rear somehow detracts.  I think it would be better if it was either all in dark or light.   The bright lighting on the right wall pulls my eye away from the model and should be toned down.  You might want to crop some of the right side or add more to the left side so she's looking into the picture rather than out of it.  There's too much negative space on the right. Nice shot. Alan.